12-14-2016, 02:12 PM
It has an affective, a multiply affective effect. The most problematic line is the best line : thirst undone : . It all makes sense in installments. I mean each line. Line by line, each line before and after has effect. But is there an overall effect? It's no bad thing to talk about what you were doing here. If you want to. I'm just reading all kinds of things out of it. I can imagine getting high on all sorts of stuff and going through the lines of this poem. It seems like that sort of course.