12-14-2016, 02:37 PM
There is an idea behind it, someone's first (forbidden)sexual experience. I was really focusing on trying to turn it into a proper poem, with poetic devices and all that. I think I kind of lost where I was trying to go with the ending. I'm not sure what you mean by affective, mind explaining?
Sorry to double post, but you've got me wondering..why is "thirst undone" the best line?
Sorry to double post, but you've got me wondering..why is "thirst undone" the best line?
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.