12-14-2016, 03:24 PM 
	
	
	
		Ah, you got to where I was trying to go with it and in a clearer thought process than I actually had. Too ambiguous, I guess. I'd like it to take some thought to get where you need to be, but I want you to actually get there. Thank you for the comments! 
	
	
	
 
	
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.
	

 

 
