Bath Time

Bath Time

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02-05-2017, 09:38 PM

Good and useful comments and suggestions. Thanks for that. I really did not put much thought into the poem, it more or less 'wrote itself'.
I will redraft it, taking into account the ideas mentioned here.

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Bath Time - by Wonderfullife - 02-03-2017, 04:50 AM

RE: Bath Time - by Donald Q. - 02-03-2017, 07:53 AM

RE: Bath Time - by dukealien - 02-05-2017, 01:56 AM

RE: Bath Time - by JaredEggo - 02-05-2017, 11:20 AM

RE: Bath Time - by Wonderfullife - 02-05-2017, 09:38 PM

RE: Bath Time - by Zella - 02-07-2017, 08:21 AM

RE: Bath Time - by Tiger the Lion - 02-07-2017, 03:30 PM

RE: Bath Time - by AsianPotato - 02-07-2017, 06:46 PM

RE: Bath Time - by Wonderfullife - 02-13-2017, 06:20 AM

RE: Bath Time - by will_speckleton - 02-15-2017, 02:11 PM

RE: Bath Time - by helloworld - 02-16-2017, 11:09 AM

RE: Bath Time - by Wonderfullife - 02-25-2017, 05:08 AM

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