—tofu pie—
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this is fun, hence the forum choice i know. but still, i love the contradictions and irony

(02-17-2017, 07:38 AM)Lizzie Wrote:  mother's making tofu pie—
two spoons honey
carob not cocoa can hear mother's voice here, health nut?
four spoons butter
     two of them peanut good line break and syntax jumble

she's glowering at the stove glowering didn't fit to my first reading, but I like the idea
slamming pans good sounds and multiple meanings

we dread dinnertime

we can eat our vegetables
only after the pie another clever flip
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Messages In This Thread
—tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 07:38 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by kolemath - 02-17-2017, 07:48 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by ellajam - 02-17-2017, 08:25 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 10:49 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by kolemath - 02-18-2017, 12:56 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-18-2017, 01:26 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by kolemath - 02-18-2017, 12:51 PM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-18-2017, 12:54 PM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Quixilated - 02-19-2017, 11:28 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-20-2017, 07:44 AM



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