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Ellajam: yes, brownies always help. The N gratefully accepts your condolences.

Kolemath: How the hell are ya? Is this what happens with you when you write a good poem or two? You hit the sidelines for a while? The game ain't over, son!

Did you think that glowering didn't work tonally, maybe? Thanks for the crit!
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Messages In This Thread
—tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 07:38 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by kolemath - 02-17-2017, 07:48 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by ellajam - 02-17-2017, 08:25 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 10:49 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by kolemath - 02-18-2017, 12:56 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-18-2017, 01:26 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by kolemath - 02-18-2017, 12:51 PM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-18-2017, 12:54 PM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Quixilated - 02-19-2017, 11:28 AM
RE: —tofu pie— - by Lizzie - 02-20-2017, 07:44 AM



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