03-29-2017, 03:48 AM
(03-29-2017, 03:07 AM)Todd Wrote: I think if something were going to be lurking it would come from under the surface of the water. Maybe some establishing line that depicts that sort of released danger from below.Thanks, Todd, maybe I'll go to lilypads or trout, they're a spring fish here, or maybe a snapping turtle
Just a thought
Nah, too threatening.Or maybe "lurk" is just wrong, the spring stuff waits, not lurks, maybe. Thanks for the comment, I had better pick something already.
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