The Feeling of life

[ellajam]

Hi, spirit. For me this poem lacks what I need from a poem, it tells me what the N thinks instead of giving me language and imagery that make me feel what the N feels. I'd like an example of how "to feel is to live": both feel and live are too abstract, encompass too many different possibilities, for the poem to lead me in any direction. Try the links in my sig for ideas of how to do this.

I hope you find the site as useful and fun to learn on as I have.

To feel is to live
to touch, and be touched by others
to experience
to be struck by reality
and be present
for our feelings inspire actions
and actions can only be executed in the moment
this moment
the moment you felt your heart beat once again