Forgiven
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first stanza, some incredible blue eyes, and maybe just a little vanity.
second stanza, a violent vision, not sure who is the hog though, works both ways. 
the last line and the title kind of envelop all this in something sweeter.
lots in a short package, i like it.
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Forgiven - by Wjames - 06-28-2017, 10:25 PM
RE: Forgiven - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-28-2017, 10:29 PM
RE: Forgiven - by vagabond - 06-29-2017, 02:15 AM
RE: Forgiven - by nibbed - 06-29-2017, 05:28 AM
RE: Forgiven - by Wjames - 06-29-2017, 08:01 AM



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