06-29-2017, 09:21 PM
I really appreciate the simplicity of this, though I must admit I expected a bit more when reading the title. "The feeling of life" is a rather large topic so I guess what I am trying to say is maybe expanding on the specific feeling that led to this poem. The moment life continues? What was happening when the heart stopped beating and then what action was taken to bring life back? I think that is what I am trying to pull from this. Just a few more words here and there that could describe the experience and action. Sorry I am new at this and probably will stumble along for a bit. All in all I found this relatable.