The Feeling of life

[Pat Doiron]

To feel is to live
to touch, and be touched by others
to experience
to be struck by reality
and be present
for our feelings inspire actions
and actions can only be executed in the moment
this moment
the moment you felt your heart beat once again

hey spiritthebrave, I get the direction you wanted to go with this, simple poetry can get a strong point across but here I feel I need to fill in to many "blanks" I find it to be "to the point" and perhaps not abstract enough to properly "feel". I understand what you're saying but cant relate a feeling to it. what is this poem trying to relate to us? i have no advice for you really, just thought I'd share my point of view