The Feeling of life

[Wright]

To feel is to live
to touch, and be touched by others
to experience
to be struck by reality
and be present
for our feelings inspire actions
and actions can only be executed in the moment
this moment
the moment you felt your heart beat once again

Hello,
Part of me really enjoys the idea of this poem including its simplicity, but another part of me doesn't for the same reason. I feel that the point your making is good but not very strong. If that was the intent I feel like I missed it. To live is something so hard to write and define especially in vague lines like the ones you have. There isn't much direction to your poem saying living is the things we do when we live and recognizing that is existence.  I'm unsure what this poem wants me think or realize. Keep up the work though!