The Feeling of life

[billy]

for me it reads more like a footnote that lacks any real feeling or emotion it doesn't cut me or hold me in any way. it uses many words to say so little. use a few metaphors/similes and try not to be profound.

To feel is to live
to touch, and be touched by others
to experience
to be struck by reality
and be present
for our feelings inspire actions
and actions can only be executed in the moment
this moment
the moment you felt your heart beat once again