The Feeling of life
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(06-26-2017, 02:38 PM)spiritthebrave Wrote:  To feel is to live
to touch, and be touched by others
to experience
to be struck by reality
and be present
for our feelings inspire actions
and actions can only be executed in the moment
this moment
the moment you felt your heart beat once again

These are good and accurate notes, anecdotes, morals, aphorisms, upon which to build a poem.   Go.  For.  It.

YOur handle is already truly intriguing, so it will be interesting to be "struck by the reality" of your poetry.
plutocratic polyphonous pandering 
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The Feeling of life - by spiritthebrave - 06-26-2017, 02:38 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by ellajam - 06-26-2017, 07:16 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Richard - 06-27-2017, 11:29 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by theyellowfog - 06-28-2017, 12:57 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Voodoogirl - 06-29-2017, 09:21 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Jokers Wild - 06-30-2017, 02:17 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by typing mantis - 07-02-2017, 08:33 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Pat Doiron - 07-18-2017, 06:08 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Wright - 07-26-2017, 11:49 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by PenPCB - 07-28-2017, 01:50 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by billy - 07-30-2017, 12:36 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-02-2017, 01:26 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Thunderembargo - 08-03-2017, 12:17 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by hanumang108 - 08-07-2017, 06:24 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by alonso ramoran - 08-14-2017, 03:08 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by DS85 - 08-15-2017, 03:00 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by FledglingTroubadour - 08-15-2017, 05:27 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by milo - 08-16-2017, 07:19 AM



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