08-04-2017, 02:23 AM
(07-21-2017, 01:32 PM)Wjames Wrote: She hid within the limbsIs this about a baby bird or a human baby? I'm torn between the two options. Ambiguous meaning.
piled high behind the old shed
where dad made bird houses
and paperweights.
Paperweights feels like a period to me here, if that makes sense? Like it's weighted..feels like an ending. :-)
After nine months, she emerged
looking as haggard and torn up as a fetus
strip mined for its stem cells.
We were glad
she kept the baby.
Maybe it's just me, but it's hard for me to imagine what a haggard and torn up fetus looks like; although I get theoretically what you're talking about with the following line.

