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The Feeling of life
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08-07-2017, 06:24 PM
Obviously, you can't argue with the truths here, but the obviousness of it is also what makes it inelegant. There's no actual feeling here, which one would assume should be paramount giving the title. I like the concepts, so my suggestion would be to rewrite this and try to express the 'feelings' associated with these ideas.
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The Feeling of life - by spiritthebrave - 06-26-2017, 02:38 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by ellajam - 06-26-2017, 07:16 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Richard - 06-27-2017, 11:29 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by theyellowfog - 06-28-2017, 12:57 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Voodoogirl - 06-29-2017, 09:21 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Jokers Wild - 06-30-2017, 02:17 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by typing mantis - 07-02-2017, 08:33 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Pat Doiron - 07-18-2017, 06:08 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Wright - 07-26-2017, 11:49 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by PenPCB - 07-28-2017, 01:50 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by billy - 07-30-2017, 12:36 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-02-2017, 01:26 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Thunderembargo - 08-03-2017, 12:17 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by hanumang108 - 08-07-2017, 06:24 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by alonso ramoran - 08-14-2017, 03:08 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by DS85 - 08-15-2017, 03:00 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by FledglingTroubadour - 08-15-2017, 05:27 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by milo - 08-16-2017, 07:19 AM
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