The Feeling of life
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(06-26-2017, 02:38 PM)spiritthebrave Wrote:  To feel is to live
to touch, and be touched by others
to experience
to be struck by reality These four lines seem to lack any originality. Great concept, yes, but that pat on the back also goes to millions of other people that had a go at it. Get creative with it. Smile
and be present
for our feelings inspire actions
and actions can only be executed in the moment This is probably my most enjoyed line from the poem. It has some dynamic and a sort of sharpness to it, but again, it's still lacking originality.
this moment
the moment you felt your heart beat once again
Expand on this thought. Reference things you've seen/known happen, things you've been through to inspire this feeling of loving experiences and admiring the unpredictability of life.
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The Feeling of life - by spiritthebrave - 06-26-2017, 02:38 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by ellajam - 06-26-2017, 07:16 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Richard - 06-27-2017, 11:29 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by theyellowfog - 06-28-2017, 12:57 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Voodoogirl - 06-29-2017, 09:21 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Jokers Wild - 06-30-2017, 02:17 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by typing mantis - 07-02-2017, 08:33 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Pat Doiron - 07-18-2017, 06:08 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Wright - 07-26-2017, 11:49 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by PenPCB - 07-28-2017, 01:50 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by billy - 07-30-2017, 12:36 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-02-2017, 01:26 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by Thunderembargo - 08-03-2017, 12:17 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by hanumang108 - 08-07-2017, 06:24 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by alonso ramoran - 08-14-2017, 03:08 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by DS85 - 08-15-2017, 03:00 AM
RE: The Feeling of life - by FledglingTroubadour - 08-15-2017, 05:27 PM
RE: The Feeling of life - by milo - 08-16-2017, 07:19 AM



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