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A Good Fall
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04-19-2018, 12:56 AM
Now that is interesting... And a little creepy. The only part unclear to me is how the 'fall' prevented the confrontation, so that feels vague. I'd also like to see more of how this unfolded so I can be as shocked as the one who had the experience. Good job on simplicity and word choices, I liked "beneath the equator".
"The best way out is always through."-Robert Frost
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A Good Fall - by Rave - 02-09-2018, 09:10 PM
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RE: A Good Fall - by Knot - 04-14-2018, 01:12 AM
RE: A Good Fall - by danny_ - 04-19-2018, 12:56 AM
RE: A Good Fall - by CodyMarsh - 06-02-2018, 12:38 PM
RE: A Good Fall - by Richard - 06-04-2018, 02:18 AM
RE: A Good Fall - by rowens - 06-04-2018, 04:17 AM
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