04-21-2018, 04:01 AM
HersheyKiss,
thanks for your feedback! the jump from being alone to seeing that others care was somewhat intentional, as I wanted to show how it feels to be depressed. You don't realize that others care for you and all you can see is through your dark tunnel vision... so you don't see or know that people do care. I did this because it took until death was right there for me to realize that people do care, and most people don't realize it until it's too late. I might try to change it up to make the idea flow a little better though (: thanks again!
thanks for your feedback! the jump from being alone to seeing that others care was somewhat intentional, as I wanted to show how it feels to be depressed. You don't realize that others care for you and all you can see is through your dark tunnel vision... so you don't see or know that people do care. I did this because it took until death was right there for me to realize that people do care, and most people don't realize it until it's too late. I might try to change it up to make the idea flow a little better though (: thanks again!