Where?

[Knot]

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Hi DJ,
what seemed far too trite is redeemed by the end line.  Nicely done.

It sags a bit in the middle two  verses:
line 5 gives me pause - make hell seem enjoyable,
'delving' I'm not sure this is the right word,
and 'draped' isn't that evocative
but, for me the biggest problem is line 12 ('floating in place'?  Really?  Something ending in 'embrace' perhaps?)

Some food for thought


Where will I find you,
oh, dear love of mine
when rains fail to fall
and the sun ceases shining?

Will you be dancing
with flames, tell me this
and falling forever
in a fiery abyss?

Or may I yet find you
rejoicing in grace,
with angelic raiment
and floating in place?

These questions need answers
just as I need you
for wherever you end up
my love, I will too.


Best, Knot

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