Where?

[ISawASpaceship]

When the rains fails to fall
and the sun ceases to shine
where will I find you,
dear love of mine?

Will you be dancing with flames
in your sinful bliss 
delving deeper and deeper
into the black abyss?

Will you be among angels
rejoicing in grace,
draped in white 
effortlessly floating in place? 

These questions need answers 
just as I need you 
for wherever you end up
you know I will too.

Dang man, you've got a bad case of love going on. I feel you, though and I know what it's like. Very well-written. Don't change a thing.

This is not sufficient critique for this forum, please elaborate

If my feelings are not a sufficient critique and I think that the piece is utter perfection, I am uncertain what you want from me. I suppose I could write a book for you if you'd like. For the mere purpose of humoring you, I will add that I liked that the writer was saying that they would end up in either heaven or hell (whether figurative or not) based upon their lover. I could talk about the fact that it personally fits my feelings right now towards someone else but I thought all of that was rather evident from what I said. As I said, I would change nothing about the poem. The description is vivid. The message is clear, rather like my comment, no matter how short it may have been.