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09-20-2021, 10:53 PM
(09-20-2021, 03:17 PM)DJesters Wrote: I agree that hell does not seem enjoyable, but I was trying to convey that perhaps it would be if the person you loved the most was there with you.I take your point, but we don't know the narrator is with their love until the last line, so I'm not sure this really works. Best, Knot . |
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RE: Where? - by Knot - 09-18-2021, 11:55 PM
RE: Where? - by DJesters - 09-20-2021, 03:17 PM
RE: Where? - by Knot - 09-20-2021, 10:53 PM
RE: Where? - by ISawASpaceship - 09-20-2021, 04:19 AM
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RE: Where? - by ISawASpaceship - 09-20-2021, 05:11 AM
RE: Where? - by Kerbonzo_beenz - 10-02-2021, 02:37 PM
RE: Where? - by Semicircle - 02-25-2022, 03:11 AM
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