10-02-2021, 02:37 PM
Maybe you could rename this to be "Where to?"
I think it could be a nice touch to the poem because it's more of a lovey way of the main character saying I'll follow you wherever you go.
The first three stanzas build up to the last line, which is my favorite, because it ties everything together nicely.
Where you were going with this was predictable so it was satisfying to see it end the way it did.
To summarize this I would have to say: it was a short and sweet way of explaining tough love, which is nice because it wasn't too convoluted and it wasn't too underworded meeting a nice middle ground between the two.
I think it could be a nice touch to the poem because it's more of a lovey way of the main character saying I'll follow you wherever you go.
The first three stanzas build up to the last line, which is my favorite, because it ties everything together nicely.
Where you were going with this was predictable so it was satisfying to see it end the way it did.
To summarize this I would have to say: it was a short and sweet way of explaining tough love, which is nice because it wasn't too convoluted and it wasn't too underworded meeting a nice middle ground between the two.