Its Day In Court
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(08-26-2022, 01:22 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  Hi Tiger,
Back again.  In case my previous comment was too obscure, I find this poem to be very well done, as usual.  I admire your ability to write so simply to such strong effect.  I particularly like your juxtaposition of the bulldogs and "little cat fee" and the last line is brilliant.  I am curious about your use of "it" as the subject in S2.  I suspect you did because it relates to the dehumanization you are addressing in the poem.  Anyway, really liked it.

Thanks,
bryn
Thanks Steve. At heart, this is a mostly whimsical statement on the opposing concerns of Officer Safety vs. Due Process. It's a serious debate that I may have approached too lightly. That's how it originally arrived in the "Fun" forum. I wanted to poke fun at "cops" without really feeling strongly enough to condemn them with a more serious thesis. 
Thanks for the comments,
Paul
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Messages In This Thread
Its Day In Court - by Tiger the Lion - 08-25-2022, 08:07 AM
RE: Its Day In Court - by brynmawr1 - 08-25-2022, 11:54 AM
RE: Its Day In Court - by brynmawr1 - 08-26-2022, 01:22 AM
RE: Its Day In Court - by Tiger the Lion - 08-29-2022, 06:15 AM



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