08-29-2022, 06:15 AM
(08-26-2022, 01:22 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: Hi Tiger,Thanks Steve. At heart, this is a mostly whimsical statement on the opposing concerns of Officer Safety vs. Due Process. It's a serious debate that I may have approached too lightly. That's how it originally arrived in the "Fun" forum. I wanted to poke fun at "cops" without really feeling strongly enough to condemn them with a more serious thesis.
Back again. In case my previous comment was too obscure, I find this poem to be very well done, as usual. I admire your ability to write so simply to such strong effect. I particularly like your juxtaposition of the bulldogs and "little cat fee" and the last line is brilliant. I am curious about your use of "it" as the subject in S2. I suspect you did because it relates to the dehumanization you are addressing in the poem. Anyway, really liked it.
Thanks,
bryn
Thanks for the comments,
Paul
