Ruminations on the Sea(more tweaks)

[brynmawr1]

Ruminations on the Sea
 
How I admire your singularity
of purpose; your timeless hurling
against stone and sand and I wonder
 
is it only the whip of a goading wind
that quickens your curling hands
when pummeling these innocent shores?
 
For I hear within your righteous roar
the counter rhyme of a retreating
sigh; the curse of forever
 
chasing the Moon's heart
that spurs you on your surge
first in her coming, again as she goes.

How I admire your singularity
of purpose; your timeless hurling
against rock and sand and I wonder
 
is it only the whip of a goading wind
that quickens your curling hands
to pummel these innocent stones?
 
For I hear within your righteous roar
the counter rhyme of a retreating
sigh; the curse of forever
 
chasing a silver heart
that spurs you in your surge
first in her coming, again as she goes.

Sea
 
How I admire your singularity
of purpose; your timeless hurling
against rock and sand and I wonder
 
is it only the whip of a goading wind
that quickens your curling hands
to pummel these innocent shores?
 
For I hear within your malevolent roar
the counter rhyme of your retreating sigh;
the curse of forever
 
chasing the Moon’s cold heart
that spurs you in your surge
first in her coming, again as she goes.