09-06-2024, 01:50 PM
A chill runs up my back
Like an angry train rolling down a track
Jarring and unwanted
The play with the rhythm and rhyme here
and the running up the back instead of the down the
chill here is going up. Not down
Running through the whole of my soul
Divided east to west
Descending into Dissonance
Bludgeoned by burden
Mapping out history's problems
There is no sense in solving
Iron nailed down
Trusses trembling
Something about the next line broke,
but I'm not yet ready to say it's bad
Under insurmountable
Under insur
Unstop
I am
Unstoppable weight
I am
Dismembered
Tensely remembering
Your touch
Your thoughts are dancing on sounds
Refusal was no refuge
Shrill screams through silence again
Still
The juggernaut keeps chugging
Along my weary bones
There's a strong sense of sound and intertextual, maybe, unconscious, flow here
Like an angry train rolling down a track
Jarring and unwanted
The play with the rhythm and rhyme here
and the running up the back instead of the down the
chill here is going up. Not down
Running through the whole of my soul
Divided east to west
Descending into Dissonance
Bludgeoned by burden
Mapping out history's problems
There is no sense in solving
Iron nailed down
Trusses trembling
Something about the next line broke,
but I'm not yet ready to say it's bad
Under insurmountable
Under insur
Unstop
I am
Unstoppable weight
I am
Dismembered
Tensely remembering
Your touch
Your thoughts are dancing on sounds
Refusal was no refuge
Shrill screams through silence again
Still
The juggernaut keeps chugging
Along my weary bones
There's a strong sense of sound and intertextual, maybe, unconscious, flow here