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Senryu Prayers

Mark A Becker Offline

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09-26-2024, 07:42 PM

Hi duke-
While this follows a 5-7-5 structure, it feels more like a few sentences than senryu. That said, they are lovely prayers.
Mark

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Senryu Prayers - by dukealien - 09-26-2024, 10:46 AM

RE: Senryu Prayers - by Mark A Becker - 09-26-2024, 07:42 PM

RE: Senryu Prayers - by rowens - 10-04-2024, 10:30 PM

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