Thanks for your thoughts everyone - this was written as sort of an attack on myself. Things that are worth doing are often unpleasant - suck it up and do it anyway.
I did add a the to the first stanza like River suggested. I think maybe the title is carrying too much of the positive aspect of the above, but then I think that going to the gym is obviously a 'good' thing to do, and adding something in the body like that could be heavy handed.
I did add a the to the first stanza like River suggested. I think maybe the title is carrying too much of the positive aspect of the above, but then I think that going to the gym is obviously a 'good' thing to do, and adding something in the body like that could be heavy handed.