03-07-2025, 09:49 AM
Hello Quicksilver.
I found your poem interesting in that it's about a person indifferent to what surrounds them, until THAT person comes to "light the candle" of they're existence.
Like a cold and grey paysage suddenly colored by a warm presence. You refer to music with "crescendo" and staccato", because relationship are about tensions, just like music. This poem looks from a person who is waiting to find (again) a spark of joy with a beloved, or more a new beloved.
This is just my humble interpretation.
I found your poem interesting in that it's about a person indifferent to what surrounds them, until THAT person comes to "light the candle" of they're existence.
Like a cold and grey paysage suddenly colored by a warm presence. You refer to music with "crescendo" and staccato", because relationship are about tensions, just like music. This poem looks from a person who is waiting to find (again) a spark of joy with a beloved, or more a new beloved.
This is just my humble interpretation.
Nietzschean freak
Classical music pianist
Artist painter
Classical music pianist
Artist painter