Veil of Meaning

[Poet-dude-ig]

I love the use of abstract imagery in this piece; key lines like the first and fifth create great highlights within the work. I would say (although it is an 8-line poem) there is a lot more abstract imagery in comparison to concrete examples. The tone within this piece is quite well curated, but I did notice there there is slight imbalance between the archaic/old English phrasing towards modern phrasing. The first and second lines you chose to use "thou" and "decree" which portray the olden feelings, but the rest of the poem reverts back to a more modern diction.

(Love this poem; bye!)