10 hours ago
(Yesterday, 01:59 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote: ConsequenceGood job using simple language to express how current loss is amplified by shooting it into the future. Still caring about the not knowing doubles the poem's immediacy. Well done.
The one I love
has died. Today,
that’s a useful lie.
But one day
it will be the truth
and I won’t know why.