Advice
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matsunosuperfan dateline='[url=tel:1792970002' Wrote:  1792970002[/url]']
Advice

“Be measured. Keep it cool, man, that’s the game.
Don’t get all emotional; that’s lame.
Don’t use dated words like “lame,” that’s cringe.
No one wants to hear a grown man whinge.
Waste no time delighting in the moon,
the ocean, the horizon, or the loon’s
torn cry at midnight—you were born in Georgia.
The only loon you know’s a girl named Georgia.
Take everything you feel and write it down
or sideways, backwards—no one really cares
unless it moves the needle, splits the shares,
glues chair to ass—you have to make a movie
of your life, man, really paint the town.
Telling the truth about it? That’s a doozy.”
It doesn’t say much - what it says is as prosaic as possible but the real chafe is all the dreadful end stops. Seriously. Couldn’t make it to the end.
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Advice - by matsunosuperfan - 10 hours ago
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