10-13-2010, 08:04 AM
it's a pretty deep poem liz.
line 7 threw me a little;
A monster dancing with the music of the cold autumn night.
for me, it spoils the ending a little.
some good lines i liked;
She is dancing for her soul,
the poem shows us that people often, are not what they appear to be.
the last line;
Her face had shown, her beauty was all lies.
worked well with the rest of the poem.
line 7 threw me a little;
A monster dancing with the music of the cold autumn night.
for me, it spoils the ending a little.
some good lines i liked;
She is dancing for her soul,
the poem shows us that people often, are not what they appear to be.
the last line;
Her face had shown, her beauty was all lies.
worked well with the rest of the poem.