Three Haikus
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Please tell me which one you like best, and why.

He's not near the end,
Nor' hath he begun his tests,
Tiny wails fill my heart.

Stinging metal bars,
heavy thick breath levitates,
gliding across glass.

Crysten drops of sun,
cooly kissing the clear glass,
they drink together.
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Three Haikus - by meanbubbles - 10-26-2010, 02:56 PM
RE: Three Haikus - by billy - 10-26-2010, 06:03 PM



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