haiku
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I had never before heard the word 'Rookery' so i thank you for enlightening me to a new (awesome) word.

Rookery seems to point at seabirds/seals etc (or do you mean collection of nests high in trees?)
and because of the scarecrow line i immediately thought the 'black cloud' was in relation to a flock of crow's, so my immediate reaction was
one of slight confusion.. I'm just curious as to your intent with this interesting wording Smile

That being said, i think this is wonderful in it's simplicity and the imagery that flows to mind with ease when reading is truly beautiful

Thank you for the wonderful read Wink
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haiku - by billy - 04-20-2011, 06:46 PM
RE: haiku - by Ris Yerg - 04-21-2011, 01:19 AM
RE: haiku - by billy - 04-25-2011, 05:50 PM
RE: haiku - by heslopian - 05-02-2011, 10:43 AM
RE: haiku - by violet - 06-08-2011, 07:00 PM
RE: haiku - by billy - 06-16-2011, 04:56 PM
RE: haiku - by Cthonian - 06-08-2011, 08:29 PM
RE: haiku - by srijantje - 06-21-2011, 10:09 AM



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