07-12-2011, 04:25 PM 
	
	
	a westerly blows
offshore cormorants and lights
fish on the menu
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					a haiku 
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		07-12-2011, 04:25 PM 
	
	 a westerly blows offshore cormorants and lights fish on the menu 
		
		
		07-12-2011, 06:14 PM 
	
	 
		I like the intereconnectedness of this, starting out large in air and ocean and gradually moving in to the immediate needs of man.  Each line is self-contained, with simple guiding statements that let the mind wander where it will.   Yes, this is haiku. 
It could be worse
 
		
		
		07-13-2011, 05:46 AM 
	
	 
		thanks for the kind words    | 
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