a haiku
#1

a westerly blows
offshore cormorants and lights
fish on the menu
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#2
I like the intereconnectedness of this, starting out large in air and ocean and gradually moving in to the immediate needs of man. Each line is self-contained, with simple guiding statements that let the mind wander where it will.

Yes, this is haiku.
It could be worse
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#3
thanks for the kind words Smile
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