06-16-2011, 04:56 PM
(06-08-2011, 07:00 PM)violet Wrote: I had never before heard the word 'Rookery' so i thank you for enlightening me to a new (awesome) word.a rook is an English member of the crow family. their collective nests is called a rookery. the flock you saw was spot on.
Rookery seems to point at seabirds/seals etc (or do you mean collection of nests high in trees?)
and because of the scarecrow line i immediately thought the 'black cloud' was in relation to a flock of crow's, so my immediate reaction was
one of slight confusion.. I'm just curious as to your intent with this interesting wording
That being said, i think this is wonderful in it's simplicity and the imagery that flows to mind with ease when reading is truly beautiful
Thank you for the wonderful read
it's an observational poem.
thanks for the kind feedback.
thanks to jack and cthonian as well


