10-20-2011, 12:34 PM
I forgot I posted this.Leanne,
So in haiku the title shouldn't be necessary information to the meaning of the poem or am I taking you too literally? Thanks for reading, I admittedly have no idea about haiku, it just makes me feel happy
I like your original interpretation more than my poem. If I change the title it will basically become a different poem . . . or maybe a more ambiguous poem. Would that be plagiarism?Billy,
I was banking on the 'nipply' kigo :p Looking at it now it's more like somebody's thoughts. I'll edit the colon out (that just sounds nasty)