02-13-2012, 12:04 PM
"My complete lack of originality and depth was designed to mislead U."
It was hardly your "lack" as you did not write the piece.
"Being poetically challenged U know I didn't write this; author unknown."
I would say the author was also poetically challenged. Written in a simply, as well as simplistic, accentual trimeter, and while it is not metered, it does have a certain rhythmical quality, which he fails at with "He has a beautiful smile," as all three accents occur in the last four syllables. This is not rocket science, we were writing this stuff in grade school.
I really don't give a damn what your sexual preference is, but I do care when someone tries and proselytizes me with propaganda, especially when it is not even written by them.
Dale
It was hardly your "lack" as you did not write the piece.
"Being poetically challenged U know I didn't write this; author unknown."
I would say the author was also poetically challenged. Written in a simply, as well as simplistic, accentual trimeter, and while it is not metered, it does have a certain rhythmical quality, which he fails at with "He has a beautiful smile," as all three accents occur in the last four syllables. This is not rocket science, we were writing this stuff in grade school.
I really don't give a damn what your sexual preference is, but I do care when someone tries and proselytizes me with propaganda, especially when it is not even written by them.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

