04-10-2012, 01:53 PM
like the consistent comparisons between soldiers and poets, as well as some of the images that struck me as inverted ("no flag will bear his breeze").
the first line took me a minute, though it does allow for many interpretations.
again, the separation between the "poet" and "all good men" is evident.
the last stanza is my fave, contrasting oaks and their stability against dandelion wishers, needing the wind really to survive and reach wherever.
i'm really rambling, but I hope it conveys positive messages
the first line took me a minute, though it does allow for many interpretations.
again, the separation between the "poet" and "all good men" is evident.
the last stanza is my fave, contrasting oaks and their stability against dandelion wishers, needing the wind really to survive and reach wherever.
i'm really rambling, but I hope it conveys positive messages
Written only for you to consider.