A Lifted Life of Leisure

[Bunx]

did not read the edits or comments. the first edit definitely used alot of great fugitive language with excellent connotative values. i found myself working at my grandpas farms contemplating the plight of oil harvesting of harvesters land. to riding my bike down the streets of my home town. awesome poem amigo

[rowens]

I just comment on whatever seems relevant to me. There's more that goes into poetry than the particular poem itself. For me there is.

Like what it is to be an American Romantic. And how that affects writing and reading someone's poetry.

I don't have to put any effort into sounding sarcastic, whatever I say is what I need to say. However it sounds.

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I think a lot of work is driven by Romantic ideas. It's never went away, in all the writings, even before there was something called being Romantic.

Anything worthy anyway.