A cry for help

[Keith]

I should explain,
there are four of us in total,
five if I include Keith,
I'm Rob the confident one.

There's John he's intelligent but shy
and Susie she's in a class of her own,
the fourth I call the monster,
he has been growing.

We all have our rooms
inside Keith's mind,
one window and a door,
when a door unlocks you're in control.

I saw the monster move this morning,
its huge body splintered the door frame
as it hurried to its prize.
I am now in a stranger's home,
this body is wasting away,
hands trembling and bloody.
I have a family tied together on my left,
they won't stop screaming,
I don't know why.
I can hear the monster coming back,
Keith needs your help.

Little blind mice, see how they run, cut off their toes with a carving knife, see how they run.

[Leanne]

This is miscellaneous, so "holy fuck Keith this is creepy" is an acceptable comment.

[billy]

sorry Keith but i have to inform you you are no longer a moderator

[Keith]

This is miscellaneous, so "holy fuck Keith this is creepy" is an acceptable comment.

Hi Leanne this is Susan don't worry everything is ok.

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sorry Keith but i have to inform you you are no longer a moderator

Sorry billy this is John when did you say you were coming to the uk one of us has something for you

[billy]

okay, you're still a mod, just the keith part though

[justcloudy]

Creepy-- yes. Insightful-- also. A way of explaining something unspeakable to the outside world-- absolutely.
I know I'll be reading this again... and again.
Thanks for sharing.

[tectak]

I should explain,
there are four of us in total,
five if I include Keith,
I'm Rob the confident one.

There's John he's intelligent but shy,
and Susie she's in a class of her own
the fourth I call the monster,
he has been growing.

We all have our rooms
inside Keith's mind,
one window and a door,
when a door unlocks your in control. Erthonaism. you're

I saw the monster move this morning,
its huge body splintered the door frame
as it hurried to its prize.
I am now in a strangers home.stranger's
This body is wasting away,
hands trembling and bloody,
I have a family tied together on my left,
they won't stop screaming,
I don't know why,
I can hear the monster coming back,
Keith needs your help.

Little blind mice see how they run cut off their toes with a carving knife see how they run

Some minor grammatical errors but a delightful tale of family life.
Best,
tectak

[Keith]

Creepy-- yes. Insightful-- also. A way of explaining something unspeakable to the outside world-- absolutely.
I know I'll be reading this again... and again.
Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for the kind words JC much appreciated. Keith

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I should explain,
there are four of us in total,
five if I include Keith,
I'm Rob the confident one.

There's John he's intelligent but shy,
and Susie she's in a class of her own
the fourth I call the monster,
he has been growing.

We all have our rooms
inside Keith's mind,
one window and a door,
when a door unlocks your in control. Erthonaism. you're

I saw the monster move this morning,
its huge body splintered the door frame
as it hurried to its prize.
I am now in a strangers home.stranger's
This body is wasting away,
hands trembling and bloody,
I have a family tied together on my left,
they won't stop screaming,
I don't know why,
I can hear the monster coming back,
Keith needs your help.

Little blind mice see how they run cut off their toes with a carving knife see how they run

Some minor grammatical errors but a delightful tale of family life.
Best,
tectak

Thank you tectak for the grandma tickle errors, I have made some adjustments. I'm glad its not just my family life that's like this, thanks for sharing. Rob