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I must center justify,
I don’t know why,
I can’t rationalize,
but
I must center justify!
.
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Golf claps to massive roaring,
ego soaring,
your clapping audience
shifts
golf claps to massive roaring.
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You've been given the clap,
the doctor's roaring,
"What the hell have you been boring?"
My wood is no Tiger!
.
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(06-01-2014, 04:46 AM)Erthona Wrote: .
I must center justify,
I don’t know why,
I can’t rationalize,
but
I must center justify!
. Clever.
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I
don't feel
the urge to center
justify unless I'm making
a hat or a mushroom but I have to say
that since joining this site, the urge has come along more
frequently.
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(06-01-2014, 06:03 AM)Erthona Wrote: .
You've been given the clap,
the doctor's roaring,
"What the hell have you been boring?"
My wood is no Tiger!
.
I feel you are mocking
my thoughtful sentence.
Although I ask for repentance,
You're all frowns and giggles.
just mercedes
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(06-01-2014, 04:46 AM)Erthona Wrote: .
I must center justify,
I don’t know why,
I can’t rationalize,
but
I must center justify!
.
I
don't
under-
stand why you
need to justify
your choice of central alignment -
maybe it is because you are neither left nor right?
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(06-01-2014, 06:59 AM)just mercedes Wrote: (06-01-2014, 04:46 AM)Erthona Wrote: .
I must center justify,
I don’t know why,
I can’t rationalize,
but
I must center justify!
.
I
don't
under-
stand why you
need to justify
your choice of central alignment -
maybe it is because you are neither left nor right?

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There is no point in greeting Wisdom when we meet her,
cause milo will shove up our bum a pointed Rictameter.
Milo is insane
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Just so! It is golden.
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(06-01-2014, 11:10 AM)Erthona Wrote: Just so! It is golden. 
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I think my eyes may never see
pretty poem as Fibonacci.
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This feels like the kind of poem which works best online  It's funny, though...
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"This feels like the kind of poem which works best onlineBig Grin It's funny, though... "
I think you are being overly kind...
It arose from critiquing one too many Newbs poems that were center justified. It can be seen as a concrete poem, as it forms a block, or a Borg ship. evidently these Newbs are under the influence of the "collective".
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(06-01-2014, 04:46 AM)Erthona Wrote: .
I must center justify,
I don’t know why,
I can’t rationalize,
but
I must center justify!
.
I must center justify,
I don’t know why,
I can’t rationalize,
but
I must center justify!
Aw, sod it.
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Did je now?!
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(06-04-2014, 09:47 PM)Erthona Wrote: Did je now?!
I'm right, aren't I?
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Sure, you're a plug.
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