01-03-2015, 11:44 AM
(12-28-2014, 12:02 PM)amiwrite Wrote:(09-21-2014, 10:37 PM)Tamara Wrote: this is just not working for me. anyone has some good suggestions?
etched on the moon
behind the clouds
my listless wandering
honestly I do not understand the meaning, or rather what you are trying to convey. I understand that there is something etched onto the moon (which stands behind clouds) but I do not see how these three lines tie in together. My suggestion would be to rewrite this, with specifically the moon in mind.
Read the Erthona post directly above yours.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions