Is Me

[71degrees]

I long to hold father
to whisper in his ear
what he has done
was not in vain

[just mercedes]

For a small poem it got wordy, I thought. Maybe something like

I long to hold father
to whisper in his ear
it was not in vain

maybe italics for the final line

[71degrees]

For a small poem it got wordy, I thought. Maybe something like

I long to hold father
to whisper in his ear
it was not in vain    

maybe italics for the final line

That's fair. I'll delete it and move it to a medium poem category