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(10-07-2016, 01:53 AM)zorcas Wrote: "Girls hate me.
They won't
ever date me."
What's wrong
with your head?
You think
they'll date you
when you’re dead?
Well, the right kind of girls will date you.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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When one doesn't wish to live
Though if they were gone
It's only pain they'd give
When one is to scared to die
Though they badly want it done
But can't bring themselves to try
Are they cowards?
Or are they selfless?
Moving forwards?
Or staying helpless?
Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Edgy sayings
“Inspirational" stuff
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(10-11-2016, 07:06 AM)dukealien Wrote: (10-11-2016, 03:05 AM)Bueller Wrote: I careen around corners,
trying not to smash
into people, break them like glass
as they cross the street.
Children in strollers,
joggers on leashes are all going
about their days as if order exists:
as if all cars have brakes
and all drivers, control.
All I can do is accelerate
and slam into this row
of cop cars, just to stop.
A more benign case of "suicide by cop" than most (in which the suicide forces police to kill him). With airbags, though, probability of success is low - more a "call for help" scenario. Very effectively written.
So, if I try to kill myself by slamming into a cop car and end up on death row for killing the cop, have I achieved my goal?
Meep meep.
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(10-12-2016, 03:22 PM)Bueller Wrote: (10-11-2016, 07:06 AM)dukealien Wrote: A more benign case of "suicide by cop" than most (in which the suicide forces police to kill him). With airbags, though, probability of success is low - more a "call for help" scenario. Very effectively written.
So, if I try to kill myself by slamming into a cop car and end up on death row for killing the cop, have I achieved my goal?
That depends on what your goal was - we only have your public statement that it was suicide. And you have to pick the state carefully: death row is pretty exclusive these days.
Non-practicing atheist