writer's block

[kolemath]

Writer’s Block
 
Mind page blank.
 
There is nothing
 
but a void
 
left by the idea
                                                                                 ed
                                                                             at
                                                                 flo
that                                                       out of my skull
when I wasn’t looking
 
            Instead,
the idea                                                                                     
 
                                              m
                                    u                p
                            j                           e
                                                           d
                                                           
from my skull
and ran down the road
to a tavern with a neon missing a letter.
                                                                                                                                                            OPEN

[just mercedes]

I like that first line - Mind page blank - I feel like that at times, that my mind has become a page my thoughts write on, in the form of poetry. I don't like thinking about it much. It leads to me to wonder just who or what exactly is doing the writing.

[Lizzie]

Hey, this is great Kole! I admire the time it must have taken to figure out the format! My favorite part is the "Pen," where, ostensibly, the writer gives up and places the pen down. I like your whimsical pieces. Takes me back to the first couple that you posted which made more use of white space. I like.

[Achebe]

the idea of a poem jumping from your head is ok, but then heading to "a tavern with a missing neon letter is genius.
loved it.

[kolemath]

thanks for the feedback, folks! sometimes I forget to have fun with this stuff