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loaf on a box
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08-16-2016, 05:51 AM
Loaf on a box
Cat likes pizza box for his bed assumes loaf position dale ©2016
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
08-16-2016, 07:57 AM
08-16-2016, 12:05 PM
I don't have a cat, so this'll have to do:
08-16-2016, 03:00 PM
similar principle, except yours is lion.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't. 
08-16-2016, 04:51 PM
08-17-2016, 04:51 AM
What is the draw about cardboard? Must be imbued with cat magic.
 dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't. 
08-17-2016, 06:31 AM
oh please
a stack of pillows or pile of laundry they'll flop anywhere
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08-17-2016, 11:00 AM
It's true, if handy, those things
they'll put they're rump on, but for cardboard, ooh for cardboard, from miles, away, they'll come. dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't. 
08-17-2016, 12:08 PM
(08-17-2016, 04:51 AM)Erthona Wrote: What is the draw about cardboard? Must be imbued with cat magic. I have two cats, and they are terrified of boxes.
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
08-18-2016, 03:18 AM
Obviously dogs in disguise
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't. 
08-18-2016, 12:28 PM
Love this!
I read in this thread that you're not supposed to interpret what you see (you speculate about what the cat likes). Granted, he probably doesn't do it if he doesn't like it, especially given the self-absorption of those cuddly kitties, but it would probably be a stronger piece if you cut "likes." [url=http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-19080.html][/url]
08-18-2016, 03:11 PM
I've noticed that people say many things, most without giving what they say much thought
 People also say do not generalize, but human beings in groups, by and large tend to follow large patterns. So while it is nearly impossible to predict or say anything specific about an individual without knowing them, the opposite is true with large groups. Taken as a given that a person is rational and not motivated by bias, generalization can be quite accurate. If this were not true, TV would not be supported by advertisement. dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
08-20-2016, 06:05 AM
A very fun image :-) Is this meant to be a haiku or just a short poem? If a haiku, then I would say that it sounds closer to a run on sentence than a haiku with separate fragment and phrase to my ears. If just a short poem, ignore this completely :-)
08-20-2016, 11:29 AM
justlikeyou,
I don't write American Haiku, but I would think that should be obvious from the lack of form. Punctuated and put in proper sentence form it would read. Cat likes pizza box for his bed. (He)Assumes (the)loaf position. But that was not my intention. My intention was to create an image using the fewest words possibly and still convey all I wished to convey. Thanks for reading and commenting, Best, dale _____________________________________________________________________ entwife, Yeah, you're the first one to mention that dale
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