White Light

[Wjames]

The fog was aglow with moths
buzzing fluorescent patterns
towards infinity.

[Keith]

I like the images and I see the flight pattern of the moth like a Lissajous figure drawing out the symbol for infinity, do moths buzz? there has to be something more descriptive and less ordinary. Best Keith

[Wjames]

Thanks Keith, the buzzing was supposed to more be the sound of a street light (and somewhat descriptive of the moth), and infinity was supposed to represent death when they hit the light.

I think I need to clear this one up a bit, maybe explicitly mention the street light.

[ellajam]

You might consider using death instead of infinity, say what you mean.